Very nice work, well thought out and the animation was very smooth. The only thing that needed to be improved would have to be the audio. In many parts the characters talking sounded fuzzy and hard to make-out. Possibly new recording equipment or editing software would be a good choice. Keep up the good work!
I like it! Sometime in the future you should re-visit this animation and draw in frames inbetween or put more detail in each slide because right now its basically an animatic. Nice work keep it up!
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